Thread:Yoshifan1219/@comment-37966578-20191122022418/@comment-44104915-20191127155544

KoopaTroopa448 wrote: SuperAngryBirdies wrote: Ok here are my tips:

For number 4, that's kinda what I thought...I just have no idea what to do for it Like I said I could re-write it.
 * 1) Keep it condensed: People get bored if things are too long so don't use too much detail, (also use paragraphs.)
 * 2) Use italics: Italics are good for separating smaller titles from the paragraph.
 * 3) Get a layout: Make a good layout for your pages otherwise things will get confused.
 * 4) Keep it clear: Make sure your story is clear across all characters.