Talk:Racketball Bird/@comment-4754255-20120116030644

one thing I have to say, as an aspiring artist/ writer, I don't thinks its good to just mention "so its a good bird" instead of outright saying it show it to us. like say. "He is very good at breaking down (insert Glass/wood/stone) but he has trouble/cannot break down (wood/glass/stone) also, something to add on his details what type of bird he's based on, his weight/size, that kind of stuff.